Grief is like a vise
Your central metaphor is powerful. Grief often doesn’t disappear; it simply loosens its grip for a while before returning. The final words, “For now,” quietly hold that truth. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you...that's how it is, isn't it. You think you're done and then, there you are again.
You really know how to make a reader feel something in their body! This one hurt. But so beautiful. Very lovely!
Thanks, Tianna that's such a great compliment. I appreciate you!!
Your central metaphor is powerful. Grief often doesn’t disappear; it simply loosens its grip for a while before returning. The final words, “For now,” quietly hold that truth. Thank you for sharing it.
Thank you...that's how it is, isn't it. You think you're done and then, there you are again.
You really know how to make a reader feel something in their body! This one hurt. But so beautiful. Very lovely!
Thanks, Tianna that's such a great compliment. I appreciate you!!