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Carolyn Keesh's avatar

Oh what an incredibly descriptive metaphor, Rithu. When I think of rumination, your poem fits perfectly

Wet Ink by Rithu's avatar

Thanks so much, Carolyn!! Ruminating has been an ongoing battle for me.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

This image really stayed with me: what is meant to save us can become what holds us back when we keep pulling it too tight.

Vianne Armour's avatar

Clever and yet simple too! Love it 😍