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wordsofeda's avatar

“You hide things left better unseen” amazing piece 👏

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

I was especially drawn to “You only reveal yourself when you want.” It felt as though the moon became a mirror for all the things in life that cannot be summoned, only received. A beautifully quiet poem.

Wet Ink by Rithu's avatar

Yes, that's it exactly. There's all this veiled beauty that you can see when it's time to see it, not when you desire or when you command it.... much like life. Thanks, as always. :-)

Carolyn Keesh's avatar

If I was the moon, I would be so honoured to receive this beautiful love letter of yours. And I would hear and answer your pleas and prayers. ❤️

Wet Ink by Rithu's avatar

Thanks, Carolyn… I should be so lucky. She gets a lot of those, I'm sure.

Carolyn Keesh's avatar

I’m sure she does. Can one ever get too many love letters? I think the demand and appreciation is infinite 🙂🌕

Wet Ink by Rithu's avatar

I agree completely. ❤️

Leonorra Dainler's avatar

So beautiful. I especially love the image of ,”The setting sun leached slowly out of the sky,

but you stayed hidden,

refusing to compete for the kingdom

that belongs to you by night.” Two regal statesmen standing strong in their dominions, undeterred by the other . Brilliant

Wet Ink by Rithu's avatar

Thank you so much. They do rule the skies, don't they.